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| rust phoenix 2007-03-01 ch 1,   | I like this, it's funny and would make a good song. I know people just like her. My favorite line: "shes an expert, slow walker, sweet talker, show stopper" |
| Deana Bell 2003-06-26 ch 1, | Lol. That's all I can think to say. Hehe. ~God bless~ P.S. If you were trying to prove a point, you did so. If you weren't, you did anyway. |
| Traced In Green 2003-06-13 ch 1, | I liked the song! I don't really like that type of people though. We just don't click...well thanks for reviewing my stuff!! luvs ~*RiotGirlGC33*~ |
| Briana, Wedgie Queen 2003-05-25 ch 1, | teehee! that is funny. it reminded me somewhat of my blonde poem... heh. well i could definately see this being a song some day. take care! hugs and platonic kisses, bRi |
| Kittioto 2003-05-17 ch 1, | ~Chuckles~ Humorous, but rather SAD if you know what I mean. ^_^ Word of advice though... due to the two curse words, you'd aught to have boosted up the rating to PG... But hey, I liked it, lol. |
| E. Hisifithith 2003-05-17 ch 1, | lol. this is good! I really like it! Kind of raw, but good! Keep up the great work! Thanx 4 the review! KaTTAn FaN |
| not sure yet 2003-05-15 ch 1, | cute, has a good flow to it |
| Needa S 2003-05-15 ch 1, | Hehehe... Cool! I like your description. LOL I bet it would make the best seller list. Great job! Thanks for your review.. Keep writing.. |
| Wrong Name Tag 2003-05-15 ch 1, | lol, amusing/interesting song. Had a real sense of tune with the line "shes an expert, slow walker, sweet talker, show stopper" ~Jess |
| Liriel87 2003-05-14 ch 1, | this rocks. |
| Arayuldawen 2003-05-14 ch 1, | haha, thats funny ^_^ ~Arayuldawen~ |
| S. R. Devaste 2003-05-13 ch 1, | nice...please reveiw some of my work. ~Sophia |