ahh!! this was SOO good! but like every single story you've written is good, so what can I say?

Hey Ice Princess -

Wow. Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow! This story was - in a word - incredible. I'll give a light critique before I gush about how much I loved it. I would have liked a bit more description of your ingenious character's appearance and the settings they find themselves in. Generally this story moved very fast because of your quick writing style, but it worked, and worked really well. I was rather perplexed as to how Caleb could have fought two men in the condition he was in. There were some spelling and grammatical errors, but not so much it took away from the story. Okay - gush time!I loved, loved, loved the absolute believability of the mob characters...and every character in general. You did such an amazing job with them all. I got complete chills from Poti and felt like he was just totally real. Excellent job. The personages really stuck out - every one of them are well rounded. I loved the dialogue, it was tremendous. I hate it when authors make their characters sound like stick people, and your speech really showed the vibrance and diversity of every character. I loved the snake and Garden of Eden metaphore. Eek! This is really long...I loved every aspect of this. I can't wait to read your other work! One of my favourite authors deffinately!

I really enjoyed this story as usual, it was great! I'm really looking forward to your new story Pandora's Box!

I really enjoyed this story as usual, it was great! I'm really looking forward to your new story Pandora's Box!

I really enjoyed this story as usual, it was great! I'm really looking forward to your new story Pandora's Box!

I'm glad that you always leave their personalities to be discovered for future fics. It makes it so much better, because there is time for development and growth. Nice ending.

He he Milton and the directors talking about Sofia. That was great. Romeo must die and Twisted, I laughed about that. I love Romeo must die. It was funny and had great action scenes. Milton ditching the cane, a good move. Hopefully it makes him feel cooler without it. Please update Codename: Icarus.

Nice ending! I got a kick when Sheldon said she liked Romeo Must Die. ;)
Great work!

I like the sound of frequent updates! I'm surprised that Riley never suspected that Nickel and the other directors were alive. Ha! I can just imagine the look of horror on his face when he saw that they were alive. I like the part where Caleb told Sheldon that he left Ben behind to man the desk.

Wow, nice stuff. Lots of action here! I'm glad they finally got the bad guys.

WOW! What a great fight. That was awesome. I didn't even suspect that Riley was the traitor. It makes sense that if the directors could fake their death, then so could he. What happened to Rawlings? Is he ok. Please update.

Aww! A very emotional chapter. It was very sweet in the end. Go Sheldon and Caleb! Kick some criminal mastermind and henchmen butt!

Well, I'm always into watching how people can become so twisted and sadistic, that they want to cause as much pain on everyone else as possible. They must have had a very rough childhood. I can't believe they derive pleasure from it.

Mac's a pretty cool guy. Although I don't really know too much about him. If you ever finish writing all the adventures of Caleb and Sheldon, will you write a series with Nickel, his best friend Milton, Cecil, and Mac in it? I love these adventures!

I like the names you use. They are awesome. Gimli- reminds me of Gimli the dwarf in the Lord of the Rings. It's a cool name. Rinaldi, makes me think of The Princess Diaries' last royal name! Sheldon and Caleb, well, I don't know anyone by that name.
Ha! Villans who think that they've finally conquered their enemy, now that's funny.