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Reviews For: Stars Above Us

Krea Davis 2008-09-19 ch 1, anon.	abuse;_; Beautiful and sad.
izziexxx 2007-04-06 ch 1,	abuse** amazing. I'm going to cry now.
Ryuske 2005-03-17 ch 1,	abuse...that was a very, VERY beautiful story...I ...LOVE this story!! The love declarations and all!! It's just a great story!! Cool!!
East Side 2005-03-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat's brilliant! Bloody brilliant!
Saraswathi R 2004-11-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. This story took the wind out of me. It was... unbelievably powerful and really, really, good. Take that from a person who hates angst 99% of the time. ;) -Hydrangea
Flies 2004-09-05 ch 1,	abuseGulping down horror. Fighting back hate. Swallowing the distant visions of death and hate, wondering if they are worth effort. Nothing is worth the effort. The flames take one to hell, but nothing can bring one back. What humans do is cruel, their lack of reason is disgusting. The differences between life and death are simple. Death is monotone, shreiking in your ears as all you can do is cry, but not feel the tears. Life, you can feel everything, everything and anything they throw at you. Some face more, and some take it all for granted. No one deserves death, but everyone must take it in the end. Never feeling the need to kill is perfect, but the desire to kill those who died an all too simply death is strange. Swallowing anything is hard. Open up though, because something's about to be forced down. This story is perfectly revulting. It captures a different, less lax view of things like gays in death camps. The visions are depicted in such a manner as to make one feel wretched and broken, pitying-- no, empathizing deeply for those who have truly suffered. It doesn't even matter that they were both men, that they were prisoners. Just that they loved each other, they had lost another, and they had to loose each other in such a simular way. Human choices ruined by human choices. Death canceled by death, life ended by love.
Stephy-moi 2004-07-19 ch 1,	abuseAw how very lovely and tragically sad. And not many people tend to lurk in the area of those years. I have to admit it's pulled off dashingly. o.o And I'm wondering how people can ask for a sequel when there aren't any characters left for that--well of the two main ones. Then again you could always do a prequel.
Anonymous 2004-07-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou have an obvious talent for description. This story was painfully beautiful with its powerful, utterly raw emotion. Every word screamed of despair and sorrow and a desperate need to survive, and I found myself hurting along with the characters. You know the perfect way to weave words and sentences together to create a story so marvelously detailed in its agonizing glory that, in the end, I felt the loss in my heart.
Stalin's Inner Child 2003-05-24 ch 1,	abuseThe only pet peeve I had was the dialouge. You used too many 'ehs, ois, and mates'. It's like you couldn't decide whether they were canadian, british, or australian. Also, the bombing of britain happened after poland was in total control of the nazis. Besides that, utterly beautiful. I cannot wait until you upload the next chapter. ::adds to alert :: You have talent. I wish you would write more stories.
LB 2003-05-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseomg! sniffles how sad! you are going to continue this, right? please?! sniffles* got to go. BYE-BYE!!
Naomi Hunter (over on fanfi... 2003-05-23 ch 1, anon.	abusesniffles That was beautiful. Simply beautiful and so touching. It's a nice setting...well not /nice/ but it's a different focus than what people think of when they hear the Holocaust. Great job. -Naomi Hunter
missORNG 2003-05-14 ch 1,	abuseInteresting :D..this one i can keep up with cuz i gotz u on alert..haha..i should go on FictionP. more..ehh. gud story..keep going
BluMascara 2003-05-14 ch 1,	abuseKinda confusing, but I'm interested.

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