y'know, you'd probably enjoy Dylan Thomas.

yet another good one ^^

the darkness i succumbed into bursts like a burning flame. you've done well.

it was pretty sweet, but there were some parts where it seemed like you forced the rhyme ("to touch your light/i feel your might") and other parts were awesome with imagery ("i wash to shore/oceans of poetry"). as you progress into the poem, it gets deeper, which is really good. you sorta sink into it like... like a warm bed. ya know? also, the rhyme pattern sorta changes throughout the poem. i'm not really a stickler for rhymes, but it definitely throws off beat. the last two words, "left inside," makes for a sweet end. travis, you're a poet.

This song just blew my mind away its so creative and awesome. this guy rocks

i love this one!