So emotional! Got me a little teary eyed *sniff sniff* You have a lot of talent here. Keep writing I look forward to your upcoming work _

really really great poem! it touches you in some way, makes you think, and even makes you feel like you were the girl in some way.

WOW. This is a great poem..This moved me and touched me on a high level. This is very emotional and it has such truths in it. It gives you such great images and you feel like you are there, and it in some parts feels like you are that little girl. I am going to add this to my favorites...Good job.