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| Shatterfly 2008-07-14 ch 11,   | I just wanted to say this has to be one of the sweetest, saddest stories I have ever read. I'll admit that the length of it was a bit daunting at first, but it's definitely worth the read. This really ranks up there in the most emotional stories I've read. I really could feel everything Lucy was, it was amazing. Excellent job as a writer and I hope that my amazement comes through in this review. I was close to tears by the end and trust me, it takes a lot to make me come remotely close to crying. I just adored this story immensely. Sincerely, Shatterfly |
| IheartStewart20 2008-04-26 ch 11, | I absolutely LOVED this! It was so amazing. Your take on the age-old time travel scenario was wonderfully different. It was fresh. I was also wondering why you chose to write about Jack Phillips. It just popped into my head as I read this. Were you also reading "A Night to Remember" and was inspired? Great story and the ending was really sweet with the dream she had of him watching over his daughter as she slept. So cute. And what did the Morse code message at the end say? |
| caw122182 2008-01-21 ch 11, | This was a good story with a kinda sad ending. |
| ANGEL992210 2007-09-03 ch 1, | Fantastic story. |
| Silver 2007-05-30 ch 10, | I loved this stoty, not really my kind since it doesnt really have a happy ending and i still kept hoping 4 it, but it was really good, sad but it left an impresion on me. Hell I even got mad at my mom 4 calling me 4 any reazon while reading it lol, anyways, it was really good.. made me cry ='( .. oh well keep the good work ^^ |
| Luv and Peace 2006-10-24 ch 10, | I read this yesterday, and I think this story is absolutely brilliant. You took the whole time travelling cliche and made it to such a unique story. Plus, I'm not so much a history buff so reading this story was a learning experience as well. Loved it, hope you get to write more historical stories! |
| angela 2006-07-25 ch 10, | I can't believe how sad I was, and hopeful, at the end of this story. It truly made me reevaluate love and how it can survive despite the worst odds. I feel as if this is one of the best stories I've read simply b/c of the simplicity of Lucy's love for Jack. Although I wish jack didn't have to die. |
| cryingelf 2006-03-19 ch 1, | this is really sad... sigh. the ending was good though! |
| friskyferret 2006-01-15 ch 10, | I'm not sure what to say, but I feel that I have to say something. I'm not even sure if you will read this seeing as this review comes almost 3 years after the story's completion. Even so, I must say how wonderful your story is. I am not a writer myself and can't put my reaction to this story into words. Just know that it was the best thing I have read in a while. It really is. I am grateful to have stumbled upon Dreaming Together Till Morning. It is one of the few things on FictionPress that is truely well written as well as entertaining and deserves to be published. I didn't want to gush too much so I'll end this here. |
| caleb king 2006-01-13 ch 10, | I have to apologize for not reviewing every chapter. After the first, I got so caught up I couldn't stop. I almost cried while at work. That was amazing. *sniff* |
| Luna 2005-05-12 ch 10, | Wow! that was a great story. it made me wish the story would never end. i found the story had alot of feeling to it and very well written. five stars and two thumbs up! |
| Dreaming Rhapsody 2005-03-26 ch 10, | Touching |
| Dawn 2005-03-25 ch 1, | Lovely story. By the way, do you mean 'philanthropist' ? |
| unfeminine wiles 2005-02-06 ch 10, | oh wow... this was an amazing story. throughout the ending, i kept on hoping that maybe there would be a "present-Jack" and Lucy would be all happy again... but, aiyi! |
| me 2004-11-29 ch 10, | i love you. so so much. your story is beautiful. |