|Reviews for You can still be mine|
| AnnaSun 10/8/03 . chapter 1
This is good.
Thanks for shairng :)
| Yaviewen 6/14/03 . chapter 1
Also very awesome. The way it repeats makes me think of song lyrics.
| Kyalia 6/9/03 . chapter 1
Good rhythm here.
| wonky donkey 5/15/03 . chapter 1
Fantastic. It rhymes perfectly, and really conveys emotional despair.
I thought it was powerful and meaningful.
Please review some of my stuff if you get the chance.