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| Guest 2007-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh whoops my bad the website link disapeared...but I really like your writing style and the plot as well. Your grammar and spelling is good, and it flows very well, which is more than some people at fictionpress can do... and the website for translating stuff is w. freetranslation. com delete the spaces in between later if it shows up this time > |
| Guest 2007-09-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseYou know you can use for tranlating phrases, though you wont be able to translate languages that use different characters (like chinese or japanese, but german works fine i think)! |
| BlackRoseVirus 2007-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseO I really like it so far. I might just stay up all night and read the rest because I am curious as to what happens next. Beautifully written XX |
| zakei 2007-05-17 ch 18, | abusewhat? lol. suu is so. omgwtfbbqbizplalacojpemmhenq. whatever that is. and you made me cry. PUU. love you anyway. love foxtrail to no end. no end no end no end. |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 17, | abuseMEEPu. YOU ROCK. YOU SUCK. YOU are such a crappy great writer. and me - a broken tape recording. again. oh gee. i should get more creative. love it. love ya. love all your crappy characters that keep running away from me when i turn around to look at them. rawr. JUST STAY THERE SO WE CAN PLAY, WON'T YA? MEEP. |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 16, | abuse! |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 15, | abusemeep. sob. this is getting so sad and emo. T_T great writing btw. its crappy good. |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 14, | abuseOH NO! KII! lol. and just a small question: why does kira's wounds heal so fast?! i'm envious you know. my wounds always take AGES to heal. bleah. and i want a fight scene!! i'm spoiling for a fight right now. RARR~ |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 13, | abuseOMG TTS SO FAST! and i like the alter ego. mufufuufu. and i love juno. as much as you. mwee~ |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 12, | abuse! you SUCK! what a freaking BAD cliffhanger! OH MY GOSHIES!! ZHANG! GOSH! *hops around like a bunny on ecstacy* NUU! gahs! |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 11, | abuseeeps. poor su! @__@ eckoes. eeryones so highly strung in this chapter. x_x~! love ya. love ya writing. |
| zakei 2007-05-16 ch 10, | abuseba-da ba-da ba-da! I LOVE IT! i know i sound like a broken tape recorder, but what else can i say? except that your tenses are getting on my nerves just that WEE little bit. :p so here's my proposition: you email me your chapters, i help clear up the tense mistakes. FOR FREE! isn't that great?! lol. yeah. if you don't want to tho, then nevermind. haha. keep writing |
| zakei 2007-05-15 ch 9, | abuseeeps. i want a juno story. i'll go check later. and yeah beautifully written. :p |
| zakei 2007-05-15 ch 8, | abuseMEEP. YOU MAKE ME SMILE. (: *breaks into a crazy smile* YEA! |
| zakei 2007-05-15 ch 7, | abuseeepo. seth is so. WEIRD! and i love the character development for Tai. inevitable i guess, but great nonetheless. hmm. *SUPRISE HUGS JUNO* YAY! *squiks* i always wanted to do that. x3 |