THIS IS GOD

nice writing!

This is not actually a review but I just wanted to tell you that I am still here, waiting for the remaining last pages. I come back to your profile occasionally to see if you've updated. It would be greater if you published this story into an actual book. That way my eyes wouldn't hurt so much from staring at a bright computer screen. Plus, your writing is very nice compared to a lot of published novelists.

Please, please, please, please post! How will it end? I know its' been two years, but i read this entire thing in one sitting and i when it ended where it did, i was like... "Wait What?" So please post

Oh whoops my bad the website link disapeared...but I really like your writing style and the plot as well. Your grammar and spelling is good, and it flows very well, which is more than some people at fictionpress can do...

and the website for translating stuff is w. freetranslation. com
delete the spaces in between later if it shows up this time >

You know you can use for tranlating phrases, though you wont be able to translate languages that use different characters (like chinese or japanese, but german works fine i think)!

O I really like it so far. I might just stay up all night and read the rest because I am curious as to what happens next. Beautifully written XX

what? lol. suu is so. omgwtfbbqbizplalacojpemmhenq. whatever that is. and you made me cry. PUU. love you anyway. love foxtrail to no end. no end no end no end.

MEEPu. YOU ROCK. YOU SUCK. YOU are such a crappy great writer. and me - a broken tape recording. again. oh gee. i should get more creative. love it. love ya. love all your crappy characters that keep running away from me when i turn around to look at them. rawr. JUST STAY THERE SO WE CAN PLAY, WON'T YA? MEEP.

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meep. sob. this is getting so sad and emo. T_T great writing btw. its crappy good.

OH NO! KII! lol. and just a small question: why does kira's wounds heal so fast?! i'm envious you know. my wounds always take AGES to heal. bleah. and i want a fight scene!! i'm spoiling for a fight right now. RARR~

OMG TTS SO FAST! and i like the alter ego. mufufuufu. and i love juno. as much as you. mwee~

! you SUCK! what a freaking BAD cliffhanger! OH MY GOSHIES!! ZHANG! GOSH! *hops around like a bunny on ecstacy* NUU! gahs!

eeps. poor su! @__@ eckoes. eeryones so highly strung in this chapter. x_x~! love ya. love ya writing.