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Reviews For: Dead

Alauniira Muillenh 2004-07-26 ch 6,	This is a wonderful and thought provoking story; finished, it's probably publishable (you are going to finish it right?). Your literary technique usage puts many authors to shame (especially directly addressing the reader). Go theospy and cynicism! ;)
Chavi West-Wind 2003-08-08 ch 6,	neato frito skeeto...i feel sorry for her. that dude... not the knife one, the other one. the mean one. i knew exactly what he was doing. stupid guy, taking advantage of her... grr... =^.^=
MikaQ 2003-06-14 ch 6,	..O.O...wait, you can die if you're dead? Man...this is confusin...
wacka dkid 2003-06-13 ch 5,	AH! CREEPY STALKER DUDE! had to get that out. and you of course had to end it here. thank you very much. your story is very... interesting. and death is hot! mineminemine! hehe.. i gotta go. your story rocks, im or email me if you want to talk. -krissa
MikaQ 2003-06-07 ch 5,	ah! Yay! You updated this one! OMG...who is it? Is it God? Otherwise how could he travel between the little cottages...O.O aah! I have to know!
Belle of the Ball 2003-06-06 ch 5,	Hmm, interesting. Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I must have forgotten. Anyway, I really like this story. And you don't need to worry about where it's going. It's bound to go somewhere eventually. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter!
MikaQ 2003-05-28 ch 4,	Yay! I love it! The style is so cynical, and at the same time, refreshing! waii, you have to give me an update soon so I can survive finals...>.
Raija the "Allegies! Gaah" ... 2003-05-20 ch 4,	Hey Asriya. You were sick today. Not that I know you...Umm...I likey this story. Huh? Hair goes to waist? Huh? Self satisfied manner? SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE I KNOW! screams Gaah! You're haunting me with Obsidian! Damn you and your story! runs away... I am back. despite your evilness and the fact that I'm seeing Obsidian around too much anyways. So yeah, me likey story. Death is tempermental. (is that word? I think so.). And weird girl with changing name. Hey, she'll be like you! with your job! MUAHAHHAHA! Ah! I'm just kidding! Oh yes. People got in trouble for plagerizing in French (projects) But I don't think you did. but poor Gremlin got a zeero! gaah!
Belle of the Ball 2003-05-17 ch 3,	You certainly get your chapters out fast! I usually take about two weeks in between each of mine. But that's all cool. Anyway, this was another good chapter! It was a bit longer which was cool. I like Death a lot. He seems amusing. But I wonder what he wants so badly with God? I would have thought God was the one who dealt out death anyway but oh well... Anyway, I like Inna a lot too. She very rude and opinionated and I love people like that. Anyway, I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait for more!
Freudian Slip 2003-05-16 ch 3,	I'm not sure if this makes me emphathetic or sick but I can truly relate to this character, her ideology/philosophy and her entire attitude. The fact that she was annoyed by her own death-not angered, not saddened, but annoyed- just cracked me the hell up. This is a wonderful piece of literature- your writing is engaging (you do 1st person extremely well), eloquent and there are delicious moments when you juxtapose plot, humour and philosophy. The idea is interesting and, personally, I find Death extremely sexy and hope that, when I die, he can be my master. I'm anxious to see how you're going to handle the concept of God. Please update as soon as time permits you.
Belle of the Ball 2003-05-16 ch 2,	Good chapter! A little short but still good. I really do love this idea. Anyway, I'd write a longer review but I just got some review alerts that I'm going to go crazy if I don't read soon. Anyway, get your next chapter out soon!
Meltighast 2003-05-16 ch 2,	Ach... Meltighast tried, but he couldn't help but read the next chapter... This really is too good an idea not to read. He loves it. Please do not delay in posting the next chapter. Meltighast cannot wait. In fact, he is adding you to his Favorite Stories list for the time being, so that he can check up on the story as it develops.
Meltighast 2003-05-16 ch 1,	Fluid. Very fluid indeed. (What Meltighast means to say is "this is bloody awesome stuff"). Shame that Meltighast despises first-person, and will have to discontinue reading this piece of work. Sorry, but do continue! This is too good to stop.
Belle of the Ball 2003-05-15 ch 1,	Oh, what an intriguing idea you have! Your style is very descriptive yet not too uptight; I love it. The idea is ever so slightly morbid, I'll admit, but I still think it's awesome. I strongly believe in reincarnation so that's cool too. Anyway, I'll be sure to follow along with this one and good luck with the next chapter!

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