This was a beautiful story that I can strongly relate too Im glad you posted something like this. Its always been a type of story i like to read but dont have the courage to write

This story was really amazing. Very emotional and it seemed really realistic. I read it all in one sitting! Lol.

XAmyX

This is another amazing story!

Hey! I saw that you had posted a couple of companion peices to this story, so I thought I should read it. Well, I'm not in the least bit disappointed. I think it's wonderfully written and full of meaning and beauty. Excellent job.
Don't kill Paul. :)

wow i know i usally get wrapped uop in books and stories but wow! was i ever wrapped up in this one its just... its real and it has meaning and it doesnt ahve a happy perfect ending but it has av real i may never be perfectly happy but for now i know i can survive her escapes were real honest and blut ones that people everday use and that people i know use heck that i use i right my thoughts in poems about people and i guess u could say my ending/begining was teh same as hers... well anyway i satred reading this story b/c i click on the just ins and saw the second one so i decided to read the first first b/c well it was first lol so be sure to read my review of the secoind in a couple of days or hours depends how much time i have looking forward to wat i have to read next!

DUDE! your stories are so great! I just started this one but ive read others and they are very just magnificaent you are a great writer cant wait to finish this and read the sequil well hope you keep writing...Fate

I loved your story!You should get it published!

Whoa...I started this story yesterday and just finished it. It was...amazing! There was one image that really jumped out at me was about her son stroking her scars. A really strange picture if you know what I mean, considering what happened to her. A great story, I'm just about to start reading the sequel!

The whole story was really awesome. I meant to comment every chapter, but I just kept on reading. I'm gonna move on to the sequel as soon as I have time. Your writing is great, and so introspective. Definetly keep it up!

I really really liked it. I found some great quotes from it that I'm keeping for myself, because they're so accurate about what goes through a cutter's mind.

You said some of it was based on your life...I don't know how much of it, but if things got seriously bad with you, I hope you got help. Because you're a great writer and it would be horrible to lose you.

I'll finish reading the rest when I have time...I'm loving this!

That was a great story, you are an excellent writer. I could really understand what Alora was feeling. I can't wait until the sequal.

I just finished chapter 6 despite it being 3 am where I am. I'll finish it later when I *yawn* more awake. I must say, this story is so truly unique and special that I can't think (especially at this time) of anything good enough.

Question: Why is the main character named Alora? It's just that I thought that is an unusual name. (And a name I plan to give to a daughter I might have way in the future. (I just love that name so much. Alora, hmm... beautiful.))

Well, I said I'd come back, and I did!

I wish you'd killed Paul for a better reason then not knowing what else to do, but oh well.

I think "Alora" is a fine title for it.

I started "Finding My Way Back Home" and can't wait for the catch. I know there's a catch to her hopeful future...having experienced the way you write...

Um, in other news, thanks for reviewing "Overkill." I live on reviews, as most writers do.

I added you to my buddy list and can't wait to talk to you.

I got shivers from reading "Alora." You're a great writer; never forget it.

Sabbrielle

*adds to author alert, etc.*

Hmm...I don't know what to say. I read all this in one sitting, minus a couple stops for father's day nourishment. My honest opiion? I think you should brush it up, especially adding more to the end, and see if you could get it published. Mind you, I don't give such encouragement lightly. I would say more but my computer is seriously screwing me over. More to come,

Sabbrielle

Wow. Very awesome story, well written too. Great job.