Very strange. But also very, very good.

::giggles: i like it. I want a demon! only i want a pet one :(

well keep writing!

hm, yes definantly strange, but i liked it... hehe. The ending felt rushed though, but complete in the same way... if that's at all possible...

That was dark, disturbing, and completely different... but also excellently written. Well done! ::cheers::

Darkly graphic and disturbing...*applause*

Good job. I was rather confused and didn't totally like the story, your descriptions were very good.

he he he...that was awesome. Oh, I wrote a new story it's pretty good. Read if you like. Anyway, The one thing i would change is...uh, well nothing i guess. That was wicked. Bye ness

Once again... very good morbid descriptions. But I got confused a lot...

Hm...a disturbing story...I like it! The part about mustard is a very good touch. Adds to the disturbingness. Though wouldn't mayo be just as disturbing? ;-)

I like this.. very nice. I get the image in my head of Marissa as a rattlesnake of sorts... dunno if you meant that or not, but I like it a lot. :) GOOD job. *applauds loudly* :D

I think you've captured the blindness and horrors of love very well.
Question: What exactly is Marissa?
That's something to think about.
The story was very well written, and I don't think you should post another chapter, this is good on it's own.
C.

I absolutely love this. In an odd way, you've captured the spirit of devotion in romance. This is going to my Favorites.

Ha! Crazy story, I have to admit, but definitely interesting. Whether you write another chapter or not, I'll think I'll definitely remember this one.

Wow. This was incredible. Creepy and funny and weird and intriguing. I love it!

That was definetly wicked. I think you should write another chapter.Oh, check out my story, k? Well anyway, that was great! demon in the head, priceless.