being a lover of dragons i liked this poem. "Scales dripping vermilion"cmy favorite line
a suggestion is to tighten your speech so the poem doesn't sound broken

Wow! I love Dragons!! my favourite thing to draw... and to watch in movies... and to read about! ^__^
I just had to write a review for this!

I liked this. Beautiful play with colors and images.

Nice, relating the colors to the different parts!