moving. sorry that the reviews are getting shorter, but my mental gas-tank is moving towards empty and I'm a little tired. Really though, this is good... Sorry I can't be more elaborate...

Well, um...this is nice! Yes, I like how it ends. Very sharp and unseen. Kind of, but it's one of the "read once, don't see, read twice, oh! Now I see it" poems! Creative!

Wow...I could NOT have written this deeply and tragically at 11. Wonderful piece. Dark and beautiful.

God bless

You were 11? This is good anyway but thats really cool that you were so young when you wrote it, good job. Faith