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| wordsworth in a garbage can 2004-03-19 ch 1,   | This was really a well-written story ("Spark" has to be my hands down favorite Tori Amos video, because it's so creepy). I loved the way you pulled every detail together, and made it your own somehow. |
| avidelecteur 2004-01-02 ch 1, | I think I reviewed this before, but I just reread it. Love it, love it, LOVE IT! It's soo sad, but one of your best stories. This is one of the kinds of thing your really good at. Yeah. Feel special. ~avidelecteur |
| avidelecteur 2003-11-02 ch 1, | Definately an emotional roller coaster. How could the people in the car be so mean? |
| Tycoon 2003-06-25 ch 1, | Jeez that is depressing! And for a second there I thought it was gonna be a happy ending! :'( You really should do something with a mediocre ending every once in a while...even just once...:S |
| Ciara Blaze 2003-05-20 ch 1, | Wow... very well done. :) I like the way you linked the etching on the tree to the man in your story.. and I like how you linked her being scared to hold her head underwater to a baptism gone all wrong, etc. VERY good job. Feel free to check out my other stories since you enjoyed my Waltz Into Insanity story so much. :) |
| Paul 2003-05-17 ch 1, | It was a great story except for the fact that the whole point of the song is a woman who is going to live no matter what. In the Spark video, Tori lives. She escapes with the help of no one. The song is about her thinking that she is immortal without ever having to prove herself. But when the chips were down no matter how bad the situation was, she was really willing to do what it took to live. Maybe Scarlett died, but Tori would have lived. But other than that it was a damn great story. But maybe make a sequel and give Scarlett a full tank and some chips... |
| Tashi 2003-05-17 ch 1, | Hey Jess! I loved this story...really! It was awesome...^_^ I must truly have a copy!! Could you print one off for me? *big eyes* please?! |
| Givingupthesekisses 2003-05-16 ch 1, | Wow, Jess, that was great. I was really mad at the ending though, but I loved it too! I can't wait for Talula. |
| Skip 2003-05-15 ch 1, | Very nice piece of writing.There are no gaps or lapses in it at all.I was very impressed. |
| The Voluptuous Innocent 2003-05-15 ch 1, | Great story! That is all. |