wow, what a sick **. i kinda feel like when i was reading the king nove "dolores" - the father gave me the same kind of creeps that stephen does.
anyhoo, go kick his ** and save mina!!

wow, this is getting intense

I LOVE THIS FIC

Intreasting. Keep Writing

So sad this hasn't been updated :( But I'm glad to see this was turning in a good direction...I think a little stockholm in this story would have made me sick, especially since Mina is such a strong character. Well written and unique, especially with the butterfly thing. Hope you update!

interesting, you should finish this.

This is starting to feel more and more like one of Clark's stories, just the feel of it.

sad thing is that axel was right

Scary last line, this guy is insane.

That guy gives me the creeps.
You could so be the next Louis Lowry or Mary Higgins Clark.

Finish please. please please please. please. Did I mention please?

love the story you should finish it..

PLEASE UPDATE SOON>!XD

please continue this. the way you create you characters is amazing. i really want to see this finished.

I absolutely love love Stephen, I mean he's so crazy but I can't help it, he's like a guilty pleasure. A sociopath nutcase, yes, but I can't help but love him in all of his pyscho-ness. Great job on this one, I hope that you plan on finishing this one.