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| key to the lock 2004-05-15 ch 1, | Well, in return for your review, I'm reviewing one of yours. This poem is so cool. There is one mistake, I think. "Why do you adorned me in beautiful clothes?" But I can't see anything else. The idea for this poem is wonderful. I am going through a stage of researching the Holocaust. All they really talk about are jews. They really don't mention the gypsies, or Jehovah's Witness' or such. Thanks for this magnificent poem. Please keep writing! |
| Lackadaisical-Rabbit 2003-09-29 ch 1, | That's really good. It's a nice poem. I like it. :) And it does seem more like you did research than most of the other gypsy 'fics on here. |
| Ancient Moon 2003-09-07 ch 1, | Hey that was a great poem! Most of the other Romany related things always seem to be about fantasy which is kinda annoying. This was a nice change!! |
| Osunale 2003-05-25 ch 1, | whether or not this is how a gypsy would really have thought, this was incredible, it seems so real, you show true human feelings and emotion in this one. |