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Reviews For: Boy of Summer
toysoldier 2003-10-17 . chapter 1
I like this one the best...
do i need a reason?
t.s.
aleppine 2003-09-19 . chapter 1
I, personally, would like to know what it is he is compelled to steal - or where to if you meant to 'steal away' - I wasn't sure. Anyway, I like the word steal. It's immoral.

Two o'clock in the morning is a magical time. The touch of fantasy in the last two lines makes the poem, for me. Most other poets wouldn't have chosen 'flute', not for a forest. I think it's perfect.
CaitSpain 2003-08-09 . chapter 1
Hm. I liked the fantastical qualities of this little poem. It was a nice read. ^^ Keep writing!
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