|Reviews for Exertions|
| novea21 5/20/09 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! My fiance all over again.
| V 2/17/05 . chapter 1
| Aidrianna 6/25/03 . chapter 1
lol that was funny. wonderous.
| Ed-the-female 6/23/03 . chapter 1
dude those things are hard to open! lol ish funny
| absolute0 5/17/03 . chapter 1
This is interesting. You've captured the excitement and the drama of well, er, opening a pickle jar. )
| coat 5/17/03 . chapter 1
| Cattice 5/17/03 . chapter 1
I don't know your feelings behind this poem or wether it just happened(my excuse for most things) But I like it, I was interested right from the start and searched for a deeper meaning but to find nothing by myself it made me smile, you have definantly made my day.
| Morbid Hound 5/17/03 . chapter 1
LOL! :-D sweet! good rhythm, good punchline. thumbs up!
| drawschickens 5/17/03 . chapter 1
this made me smile