Hahahahaha! My fiance all over again.

::smiles:: cute

lol that was funny. wonderous.

dude those things are hard to open! lol ish funny

This is interesting. You've captured the excitement and the drama of well, er, opening a pickle jar. )

Lol! Funnay

I don't know your feelings behind this poem or wether it just happened(my excuse for most things) But I like it, I was interested right from the start and searched for a deeper meaning but to find nothing by myself it made me smile, you have definantly made my day.

Cattice

LOL! :-D sweet! good rhythm, good punchline. thumbs up!

this made me smile