o.o i looked up dreak in the urban dictionary. apparently it means to pretend to accidently put the boy part up a girlfriends bum. yeah, i'll just assume you made up a meaning...

This is excellent story with great characters and an excellent plot! Now I'm hooked and have to read the next parts.

Okay, WHY THE HELL AREN'T THERE MORE REVIEWS FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY?!

I don't understand it. I like this a lot, and I am bouncing up and down to read the next part once I am done reviewing this half. I like the characters, especially Tempesta.

People are nuts not to read & review this story.

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You should have many more reviews. This is such a beautifully executed story. The characters complex and interesting. I can honestly say that I love this, the best story I have read on this site, at least. Thank you, I will be reading the other parts as soon as I can.

This is a very great story. I absolutely love the character development. I was actually going around looking for stories about angels and demons in the Slash Fantasy genre. I’m writing my own type of story on it, and I was very happy to see that your story is completely different. It allows me to continue reading your story and write mine without getting confused.

Anyway, I’ll stop rambling and finish reading. Also, I hope you don’t mind if I add your story to my C2 on Slash Fantasy.

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~VGT~

Wow, that was long, Not that it matters however.
First thing I would like to say is that you are honestly the first person on this site that I have seen, who has written a slash character that actually considers the fact that he does not exactly fit into the mold (you with the whoole liking men thing). I was planning to do this in a slash story that i will write eventually, and i hope that you dont get angry for me sharing your idea.
Anyways, this story is very much intriguing. I am happy that you suggested it to me. I really like your description of how the government is set up, and how women are treated and such, It really does add to the story.
Anyways, I hope you start the second part soon. I will read more of this sometime over the weekend.
Until then
MidnightSorceress

Marzio and Ignis are both very wonderful people who're perfect for another, me thinks *g*

And I'm also liking Owen, Tempesta (hehe, female role model here!), Ceni and Lord Angus. Can't say that I like Kelan, though, he's a bastard. I hope Tempesta and Owen will get married, they make for a cute couple.

ah, and so ends part one... *sigh* Now foward to part two! ^_^

argh... Kelan really gets on my nerves... and shoot for the interruption...

o_O; Yup... stupid, old, batty coot who can't keep his stupid damned opinions to himself... blah... it's rare for there to be truely capable political leaders... blah... Oh, now let's see what happens next chapter! ^_^

oh damn! He's gonna pay for making Marzio bleed! >_< Stupid, cooty, old man. o_O; I think he pissed Ignis off... oh boy... *pats Marzio on the head*

hmm... not much to say about this chapter... nice and descriptive as usual... and what Ignis did was neat. ^_^; Um... I'll just be moving along to that next chapter now...

crappers... -_- Well, the Angelians lost the battle... blah... Now what happens to Marzio?

ha ha ha ha... so it was Ignis who had the dream then... And shoot... a bloody bloodbath coming up? -_- Lol. Alive and naked in his bed does sound good, doesn't it? ^^;

Who... ^_^; Damn war, but whoot for the pretty boys! or handsome men or uh... blah.. o_O; War Council? Sounds like a bunch of stupid old fools to me. -_-