I love how it kind of told a tale as it went along. Very magical I must say!

This is so beautiful. I covet your ability to rhyme and maintain a smoothness of verse. I also love the images you create. Phoenixes are really dear to me and a symbol of my dearest hope right now, as I express in my "Murder of Innocence". Your poem is very moving and meaningful.

Wow...the imagery in this is amazing...yet it's so simple. Everyone who's a fantasy buff knows about the story behind a phoenix, and even though this is nothing new, it seems...(bad pun time?) reborn when you write it. Lines like "through mourning does it heal" are really powerful, and the whole last stanza is beautiful. it kind of gives hope about afterlife, almost. Really nice, really well done. Another phoenix poem I'm glad I read. :)

Wow...

Amazing poem. It has a great rhythm, and the rhyming is very nice. And let's not forget the wonderful imagery you portrayed... Anyways, awesome work, keep writing.

Wow this is amazing! I love the rhythem.

Wow, this is really good; the rhyming has a nice flow and the imagery is very visual.

Wow. Amazing!

You flow very nicely from one line to another, not to mention the amazing images you portray! You definitely have a very God-given talent!

Keep up the good work!

Toodles,

~Rani~

I love these fantasy pieces. This one reminds me of fawkes (sp?). The imagery is really vivid.

Yay! I love the phoenix and a bajillion other fantasy/mythical creatures! Woohoo for you. I like this writing style as well. ^^ Now if you'll excuse me...I'm going to check out 'Inner Beauty'

Hi. Great poem. I like the tales of the phoenix, my favorite mythical bird, and your poem puts the basic meaning of all of it into one place.

I also read your profile. It's great to find someone Christian who believes in Him and will testify. I love the song Testify to Love! Avalon is a great band. Hey, try 'Undeniably You'. Great song.

Well, I don't have anything else to say, so ci`ao.

Interesting subject. The phoenix represents so many things, and you do a great job of portraying them! Keep it up.

Oh wow...this is so beautiful!

Actually, it was a little weird seeing this poem because this is exactly--exactly--what I'm doing for a project at school. We're doing the phoenix because its in so many cultures (its, um, EVERYWHERE) and we needed 5 int'l themes...o-kay, i'm *really* rambling now. Great job!

This is beautiful. Amazing description!!
~Gracie Lou, friend of Jade Levita

I like this a lot. Your use of rhyme and iambs is wonderful. The Phenenix seemed to come alive as I read this poem.

interesting rhyming scheme. I like how the description of the bird was done. I'm glad you didn't say: "The bird is pretty, her name was Bitty" or something else equally boring and uninspired. good job!