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| Peachez 24 2005-02-27 ch 12,  | abuseAh... the lovely thought of being stuck with a brother like that for all eternity would bog me down as well. ^-^ Great chapter though you're very cruel in the way you ended. Indeed, I'm sure Lucas will be alright but what of this massacre? What will the people do about it and how will this go explained? Will Rosalyn be blamed for her family's deaths? Hm... too many questions and none answered...Keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| Pothe 2005-02-23 ch 12, | abuseooh quite an intruiging story you've created here. at first i was a bit sceptical of the whole william plot thing but now im dying to read more about his plan ^^. |
| Wondering Wolf 2005-02-22 ch 12, | abuseOk I just read this and I couldn't stop reading. This is story telling at its best. You are a great writer and story teller. I wish that I had your talent. Please tell me that you are going to publish some of this. |
| Cold Starfire 2004-10-06 ch 2, | abuseLove the story, please, do continue. interesting plot too. |
| Peachez 24 2004-09-27 ch 11, | abuseVery well done gurl. You've definitely put her in quite the bind, and Lucas as well. He may be willing to let her go but I do not believe William will. Something must go right. Keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| green n yellow fish 2004-08-29 ch 11, | abusei love this story! i hope there is more to it! (hint hint) |
| swim052001 2004-01-31 ch 10, | abusehumm decisions decisions good story sorry I haven't started to read it earlier but oh well. Update soon! |
| Peachez 24 2004-01-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseThere's an idea. A terrible one at that. What will Lucas think of this? Or will he see it as something good. I mean, afterall, he may care for her but his brother... well he can be quite the hazard to her health. And in many ways. This can go so many ways, good and bad, gurl. Keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| Maharanjoni 2004-01-30 ch 10, | abuserather short but still pretty good. the story is getting even more interesting as the plot develops. update soon! -Em |
| RainySunshine 2003-09-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat story. Update soon! |
| Punk'd 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseFantastic! |
| Maharanjoni 2003-09-06 ch 9, | abusethats okay, it wasnt that bad. It had about two plot twists (unexpected) that really made it good. Although i just have to say EW to William. trying to sleep with your own grandmother, no matter how hot she is is just wrong. I cant wait to see who this new suitor is -- update soon! -Em |
| Peachez 24 2003-09-05 ch 9, | abuseNo, I thought that chapter was pretty good. Entertaining too. Poor Luke really seems to have a few problems on his hands. Not exactly all horrible, but definitely traumatizing! I mean ur brother and your grandmother! Ok, that's wrong! EW! Anyway keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| Krikoris 2003-08-19 ch 8, | abuseSorry for not reviewing earlier, many apologizes. N o o o o o o o o o o o o! Ahem, Will better not hurt that little girl, or a very unhappy Krikoris shall make sure he cant do it again. And if Lucas hurts her . . . . Jariath will probably do a little dance around, singing joyful songs and all that good stuff. I liked the ending, muy muy bien. Yep, no hablo espanol . . . .un poco espanol. Damn it. School sux. Krikoris |
| Maharanjoni 2003-08-19 ch 8, | abuseNYohohohohohohohohoho!! that wasnt a crappy ending. . . just sort of a cliffy. but i did like this chapter!! cant wait to see what happens (as always) so please update again soon!! |