This is simply beautiful. I love the play of words intertwined with the rhymes. Good job, good job.

~~Trinity

There is a lovely rythm to this poem, which is in keeping with the dancing theme. Beautiful! :-)

wow. really wow. very perfectly me. congrats on making the fave stories list!

I love the energy of this poem... I know you would love to see this in a song... If ever that occurs, send it to me as well... I'm sure it will be awesome :-)

Hey hun,
You don't know me, but Walking Contraditcion recomended that I check out some of you stuff, so here I am, checking it out hehe. Awesome awesome poemy songy thing. Really well written, wish I could do that. If you want ot check out some average poetry, check some of mine out.

Gnat

hey sarah just reviewin again to give ya smile or whatever this may cause hehe. well this was really good as is most of your writing. well ne who. i guess i'll ttyl. (p.s. go read my stuff and review hehe j/k u dont gotta if u dont wanna) have a good day.
brittany

Ahh, so i liked the repetitiveness of it... It seemed to enhance (for the lack of a better word) it, and helped get the point across.

I enjoyed this personally, a lot, because i'm so into music, and just the first two lines completely captured me.

I loved it. Great work, considering it seemed to remind me that it's better to smile than frown, because He's here... It's really inspirational, and I hope you know that. Seriously impressive. Kudos!