Wow! How could I have overlooked this previously? This is fascinating. The idea of the act coming *down* when on the stage...oh my goodness, that's amazing. lol I love this, it is very original. _ Splendid work, keep at it!

*sighs dreamilly* Been there.. Oi, the memories. Very nicely done, it definately speaks to me. 9/10

aw! How sad. Keep writing! _ JMBunny

Really good. You describe the way you're feeling, what's happening in a moment, While still telling the whole story. I like this poem.

Jesu Cristo! You read my mind! My Lord, this is my LIFE! Nothing I do is real...it's all an act...wow. This is AWESOME.

-SS