you write beautifully. your verse has such a flair to it; the flames of talent burn deep within your soul. shut up, i'm exhausted, i can use shitty metaphors. ...i love your diction...

A little ol' review can seriously not do this poem justice. At all.

It's just absolutely incredible.

...I really can't say anything else.

Laura

(Sorry, I can't seem to login)

Anyway, this is absolutely beautiful.. You have a wonderful choice of words here.. Its amazing how you wrote all of the lines.. It was so well crafted and so meaningful.. You managed to write without forcing the point on the reader.. Its good.. Really good.. So beautiful that I'm rendered speechless.. Wow.. Excellent piece of work.. I loved it..

hm, long time, no speak... *shrugs* i don't care. anywyays.

maybe its just the way i interpreted it, but you seem to be a lot happier (me not being around people seems to have that affect), and i'm glad you feel that your life hasn't been a waste and you've seen and done many things. nice prose and metaphors. x

Amazing.

I've been sitting here for a good two minutes and can't find words to describe how beautiful that is.

-grin-

Wonderful, as always.

Wonderful, as always! Beautifully written, very descriptive.