You are an incredibly talented writer, as I mentioned earlier. Just a quick question: What do you mean by, "his mangled hair"? How can one's hair be 'mangled'?

Oh my God. I'm speechless. This was beautiful and so full of emotion. I know who Katrina was and i truly believe you would do that for her. I love the last thing Mike says "My only rose without a thron"
Its wonderful.

holy mother ** **, damn u nick, y do u hafta make me cry? y do i have some strange feelin u were thinking this is wht would happen 2 u n caitlin if sumthin like his happened in our school...damn the morbidness (if thats a word) but, i absolutely love it...

That was a great story. I'm glad it was only a dream, not reality. You should write another story or a sequal to it. It was really sad, but had lots of detail!!

yay! i honestly liked that! keep it up!

That really was a beautiful story. It made me cry.

wow nick... that was really good, really deep too. It was really good, you really need to write something that doesnt make me cry though, one day you better do it

omg nick...

this is so sad. Ahh!! Poor Katrina!