|Reviews for avocado|
| ittybittytreefrog 7/24/03 . chapter 1
Cannot twist or pull
To reach the treasure inside
So you must use force
Voila! A haiku about a can opener. And it actually has a deeper meaning too. Wow, I'm good! Lol.
I liked this poem. I've known people like this too. You can never know what you'll find in people once you get past the outside.
| Gemtog4319 5/20/03 . chapter 1
Pizza or YO MAMAS coach? This story must be about me, but my name ISNT STROMBOLLI! This story is really dumb, just like your brain. My sister Queech Quon beg to diffa with the story's moral. NO WONDER YOU'RE AN IDIOT! AHZAH!
| Keep it 100 5/19/03 . chapter 1
Oh! The symbolism! I love it!
A haiku on a can opener?
I'll write one in a few hours. I promise, but right now I have a head ache and cannot work.
Heart of the Sword
| Soaring Groundhog 5/19/03 . chapter 1
DUH, CAN OPENERS
CAN BE VERY HARD TO WORK,
BUT I WILL DO WELL!
| Miamouse 5/19/03 . chapter 1
I loved this poem, the analogy coupled with the rhythm and vocab... great.
hm, a haiku on a can opener? mk...
It is impossible to use
You almost always get a nasty cut
I don't even like beans
| CoolBeans18s 5/19/03 . chapter 1
| i m pooders 5/18/03 . chapter 1
The only haiku I know about is a perfume that Avon makes _
However, I liked this poem.