Wow, I just sat here and read the entire story in 2 hours, I was THAT into it :)

Awesome story, I loved it. And Jake needs to turn into a real person so I can hug him, LOL

(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way!)

Wynter

aw! jake is such a sweetheart! god, i wish someone like him really existed!
rikku

i like the qoutes you used, very nice. but must you have left it off at 'Dear Lizzie'? Well, i guess i can't talk, i left off one of the chapters to my stories at "Sammee, I -" so, i guess we've done the same thing. good job, i LOVE this so much! *faves list* wait, it's ALREADY on mai faves...well...oh well!
rikku

yay! it's happening! *happy dance*
rikku

NO, LIZZIE, YOU IDIOT! why'd you make her leave him, eh? EH?
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excellent job so far, i can't wait to read what happens next! so i think i will!
rikku

evil lil fag. colin is evil and should die.
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good job so far .
rikku

JAKE IS AN IDIOT. he could have atleast waited for tessa, even tho she was being a complete jerk.
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good job! XD
rikku

the lil fag. i knew colin was a fag.
rikku

oh no. stupid tessa. i totally remember this from a movie, but the tessa-like character was english and liked the same guy as the Lizzie-like girl. well, i must keep reading.
rikku

NO! stupid colin! CURSE HIM! well, whatev. can't wait to read more, but i can't tonite...it's 'bed time' gr. excellent job so far!
rikku

JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE JAKE.
jake is an awesome sexy beast and i hope it was him. i wish i knew a guy like him. *sigh*
rikku

Madam Rosselli SCARES me. okay, so not really, she's cool. but i mean STILL. most carnival people are definetly NOT like that. *shudder* she was totally, seriously psychic, huh? well, excellent.
rikku

i love that last line Tessa says! IT'S BRILLIANT! lol, i don't know why, but it is absolutely grand. WONDERFUL job! (oh, look who pulled off a better word than good!) lol.
rikku

i really like all the titles for the chapters you use. they're creative. well, again, good job. i know i've used that like every time, and it really does barely cover it, but...yeah. VERY good job. lol.
rikku

oh, well this is wonderful. colin showing up i mean. well, good job!
rikku