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Reviews For: The Death of Beauty

color by number
2003-05-31
ch 1,
okay, again LOVE your use of vocabulary. makes your work so intriguing to read. i really like the line: "you were unabridged, with a glow that supplanted the most radiant of beings." **
Charlie Parramore
2003-05-22
ch 1,
This is really good stuff. The whole tone of the poem captures the sense of beauty that's been lost and the language is just exquisite. The poem gives me the feeling that it describes of someone of tragic genius for whom the world was not prepared to hear or see.
hoellenwauwau
2003-05-20
ch 1,
brilliant! the imagery is just so beautiful and this poem is so sad. shows that mankind isn't ready for anything so beautiful cause we would never notice...great job!
cio, hoellenwauwau
ionlyliveindreams
2003-05-19
ch 1,
Cool... I like it. It has a nice sound to it. I like the idea, and you've expressed it well.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
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