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| lizz 2003-06-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh cool story! very nicely written. I hope you update soon! :) |
| Bombay 2003-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story! Please continue! :) |
| GinaO 2003-06-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome! Great story and I really like the plot. Nice writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :) |
| Stinariffic 2003-06-08 ch 2,  | abusewow awsome plz udate soon |
| nikki 2003-06-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseno you must keep going!! YOU ALWAYS DOO THAT JUST AS I GET INTO A STORY YOU WRITE..it stops.. gr MUST-KEEP-WRITING-MUST-NOT-STOP-STORY! lol good job |
| Faded Soulfire 2003-05-30 ch 2, | abuseSorry! I thought my review for this chapter sent but I guess it didn't. Anyway, Cari is quite interesting and so is the agent...It's kind of funny how she acts but with her killing people is a bit extreme but it makes this story very interesting. And I updated Enigma. I'm now on chapter two and its longer than the first one. I hope you enjoy it! Cuz I enjoyed this. Much Love, Faded Soulfire |
| UrbanPrincess 2003-05-28 ch 2, | abusehey chica! I'm loving it so far! Great writing! I can't wait for more so hurry! |
| that-was-my-heart 2003-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story. Please continue and I'll promise to be your loyal reviewer. ;) |
| Faded Soulfire 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseHey! This is a really intriguing start of a story. There were a few spelling mistakes and I think a word wasn't spaced right but it was to my liking. Stories like this tend to grab my attention and since its at a bit of a cliff hanger I really want to know what happens next. And maybe a longer chapter? I guess thats about all I can think of but I really would like to see where you are willing to take this. I hope you continue and I'll be sure to check out your poems. And if your possibly not busy would you take a peak at my stories and collection of poems? I would really appreciate it. Much Love, FS |