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| eew 2003-05-28 ch 1,   | The words flow perfectly. Keep Writing ~CRESCENT BUTTERFLY~ |
| ionlyliveindreams 2003-05-19 ch 1, | Woah, kinda creepy. I like the rhyme at the begining. There are only a few grammar mistakes. Nothing too serious. Cool poem. Keep writing ~ionlyliveindreams |
| Keep it 100 2003-05-19 ch 1, | That was really beautiful. You have a real talent. ~Heart of the Sword |