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| WizeSandz 2003-09-17 ch 1, | How did I randomly miss this story too? It's so CUTE. I think you actually really captured two characters without any visual at all. I really liked the voice in it. I got a little confused at the end when they went so quickly from sweeping up the pot to "g'night." that's probably my only qualm,though. CUTE. |
| Kai Michi 2003-05-22 ch 1, | That was definately too sweet. I loved it. The fact that there are no character descriptions, just dialogue and motion, enhances the mood of the piece. Great work! |