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Reviews For: Through The Darkness
DefianceIsMe 2003-05-19 . chapter 1
This is very hopeful yes. I like how you said...In a crowd of the silent...it's a contrast because you think crowd=loud noisy rowdy group of ppl...not silent. I dunno...I'm weird...it make's me shiver...I'm rambling...ugh. Good poem. ^_^
Dark Vagrant 2003-05-19 . chapter 1
Go ice dagger! I knew you could write a non-angst and get away with it. You are actually a very good happy poem writer. Hone your skills and dominate the world of poetry!
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