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Reviews For: Bliss

neverhaze
2003-10-29
ch 1,
i really like the ending, how you wrote "when he loved her out loud for the first time", thats pretty gripping =). did you write this from personal experience? anyways, i really liked it. r/r some of my stuff if you want.
Tenshi Anrui
2003-07-05
ch 1,
Oh My God... that was beautiful. I absolutely love it. It's a Love poem done well, you have talent. And a lot of it, from which I can tell. You better continue writing, cause you might change the world one day. Really, keep writing so I can read it!!

If you could pretty please read some of my work, I would appericate it. Thank you.
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