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Kenishiro 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
freaky... how do you come up with that?
great story!
godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
hm...is Amelia next on the menu?

About my other review--that wasn't meant to be a flame or anything, but again, if you don't know that much about it, then why did you write about it? And if it was set in the future, why didn't you say so? I certainly couldn't tell just from reading it. You might be surprised to know that, actually, I *am* a Christian. Anyways. It actually wasn't that badly written, either, until you got to the end and stopped developing a story but resorted to "And she suddenly became model Christian and miracles happened and everyone persecuted her but she was strong and everyone lived (died?) happily ever after the end. YAY!!" Sorry. But you had a potentially good story; you kinda ruined it with the whole "magical transformation into perfect christian" thing. Although if you think about it, it probably wouldn't be very Christian just to go over and start poushing bibles at people. I mean, would you want a Muslim missionary to come to you and start randomly telling you that the Bible is bad, the Qoran is the only way, and Allah is the one true and saving light? Of course, Allah and God ar basically the same thing, but...you get the point. Hopefully. Remember the golden rule?
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