I don't usually read songs... But to you I opend an exception.. It's great! Have you found someone to play it?

Great write! I love the first stanza, awesome lyrics.

You are NOT a lousy writer! It takes ALOT for me to give a compliment about writing and I usually don't reveiw things that don't impress me. I greatly enjoyed this poem, stop putting yourself down! ^.~

seriously dude, you are defintely one of the better writers ive seen so far, and ive seen a lot, to be honest, by far from the best because ive seen some sick **, but your not bad at all, this is good, really good, full of emotion and has an excellent flow to it, and if its with a kick ** melody you could seriously be up there with some hot ** bands, dont be so melodramatic, excellent poem song whatever you want it to be

Thumbs-up on the song! Stop putting yourself down and keep writing you are very talented. Thanks for the review!!

This is so beautiful, so well written I haven't read anything close to this standard in a long time.

Its not lame and its not dumb and its not pointless!! Its something a lot of us can relate to.

I am utterly wowed!

This is so beautiful, so well written I haven't read anything close to this standard in a long time.

Its not lame and its not dumb and its not pointless!! Its something a lot of us can relate to.

I am utterly wowed!

This was good, so stop putting yourself down. We don't have to write masterpieces all the time. Now to the poem, because of the structure I interpreted this more as a song. Nevertheless, it was well-written and had a strong message. I feel that I can relate to what you're saying. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

dude that's a cool song, i really like it a lot .. you got music for it yet?

hey it may or may not have sucked but i could relate to it, trust me. from the tone i got that it wasn't remorsefull or regreting which is hard to do with this subject. almost like hey thanks for being in my life and it's your problem if you leave me, i'm still functioning without you.
I like, see ya
Jasmine