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Reviews For: Constant Confusion

Wrong Name Tag
2003-05-22
ch 1,
Pretty good, I especially loved the lines "Brushing back protests like your silver-blond hair/You showed me true heartache, you taught me despair" Great job

~Jess
Sunlit Rain
2003-05-20
ch 1,
Very nice. You describe things in a good and genuine manner.
Erica
2003-05-20
ch 1,
I really liked this one too, it reminds me of my Ex-boyfriend in so many different ways. I loved it.
cosmo-queen
2003-05-20
ch 1,
A good song. It had rhythm to it. The rhyming was really good and flowed well. I especially liked the first verse and the line "You break me down, you build me up, you tear me apart." Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
Shadafakup
2003-05-20
ch 1,
Powerfull.. Man I liked it.. Especially the 'chorus'.. The descriptions here were wonderful and everythin else just fits in.. Wow.. Well done!
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