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| Wrong Name Tag 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Pretty good, I especially loved the lines "Brushing back protests like your silver-blond hair/You showed me true heartache, you taught me despair" Great job ~Jess |
| Sunlit Rain 2003-05-20 ch 1, | Very nice. You describe things in a good and genuine manner. |
| Erica 2003-05-20 ch 1, | I really liked this one too, it reminds me of my Ex-boyfriend in so many different ways. I loved it. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-05-20 ch 1, | A good song. It had rhythm to it. The rhyming was really good and flowed well. I especially liked the first verse and the line "You break me down, you build me up, you tear me apart." Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Shadafakup 2003-05-20 ch 1, | Powerfull.. Man I liked it.. Especially the 'chorus'.. The descriptions here were wonderful and everythin else just fits in.. Wow.. Well done! |