Reviews for When First We Met

Be Summer Rain 2003-07-28 ch 1,	abuseAw...so sweet...and I especially like your repetition of I Knew...it really works well.
InMemoryofPhil 2003-07-14 ch 1,	abusethis was such a sweet story. beautifully written. good job Have a nice day! :)
Lucy Dowell 2003-06-11 ch 1,	abusewow this is awesome thats all i can say Lucy D.
obsidian katana 2003-06-09 ch 1,	abusebeautiful! great poem, very sweet, full of emotion! i'm sure most mothers feel this way about their child, among the most precious and beloved in her life. you did a good job describing a mother's feelings. keep up the good work!
Needa S 2003-05-28 ch 1,	abuseSoo sweet! Excellent job!!
NatashaRostof 2003-05-23 ch 1,	abuseAww. I've read this before, but I still think it's so sweet. Lovely, darling. :o)
PainKiller 2003-05-20 ch 1,	abuseThis is so wonderfully portrayed in poetry. I absolutely love this. I especially like the way you used the same first line over and over again at the beginning of each stanza. Awsome work, Bethany!