I totally understand your mind,this poem is awsome.If someone doesn't get this they are stupid.I love your poem,I also like having you for a freind ^-^

Are you a curse
Or are you a blessing?
Are you just a mere part of nature
Or do you have a will or your own?

^ i like this lines

i love cold weather :) it's my fave kind. although it often makes me sick (in fact, i have a cold right now), it can make me comfortable. i know what ya mean about asking questions. i do the same thing! of course, i don't write a lot of poetry, but i ask q's in my head, to others, in writing...

anyway, good job :) keep writing!

Uh, running out of adjectives here...

(FOR SHAME. A writer not able to think of adjectives?! This is a catastrophe!)

This is wonderful. Spectacular. Marvelous. Amazing. Beautiful.

(That's better.)

Write on!

~sol

very imaginative!!

i think your trying to catagorize cold as a human, and you simply can't compare something that is so unconnected and enternal as cold to humans, it doesn't work. but in all i liked your poem, you ask almost as many questions as me it seems. and i liked your metaphor, thats very different. and thanks for reviewing my poem, and feel free to go and check out some of my others.

I love the words you used in this poem. They were so vivid and clever...another extraordinary piece. I'm just getting over a cold right now.

I've never seen anything like this before. It was really original and you wrote it very well.


~Heart of the Sword

cool piece. i like it! lotsa nice questions. you did a god job. keep it up!