cool! mesa likey. all true and some sweet, like chocolate :drools: i like chocolate, do yOu like chocolate? who doesn't? *sigh* I need to stop,
later

nice poem :) true, too... hehe. i liked how your rhymed everything :) keep up the good work!

oh this was great...i like the way it just flows on...wonderful..lol

amusing, but deep, too.
i enjoyed that a lot.
[audig]

Again, you've brought out the wonder of a child, and a reminder of how many times we dream we could be back there again!

he he, too true. i like this one (i'm just in a grand mood today now aren't i?) because it makes you appreciate all the small things in life while giving you a big smile and a little laugh. ^-^~*

I admit, I was giggling through this. Some parts were quite true, though -- "A friend without a 'Hi'" and "Life without fun" made me stop and think.

I'll be dropping in later.

~ Moriah

This is a great poem, showing us that everyday objects and events are more detailed and important. I love your style!

That made me smile. I know you were just looking for a rhyme, but foxes can't lie. That's a uniquely human trait. Also, light without the sun is pretty useful.

Haha! nice! I loved it...great rhyming too ^.~!! ~Jodi147

big smiles for this one... loved how it read and the end note is great.

ps, ta for reviewing... paint whatever picture you like with my enigma haiku...

This one put a smile on my face. ^_^

That's good!

You're talented!

Awesome.
It rhymes so nicely

Heh. These were really good. It reminds me of something someone asked me the other day. "If you say something is indescribable, did you just describe it?"


~Heart of the Sword