|Reviews for Blue Sequins|
| chickadee 8/22/03 . chapter 1
the line "don't turn to me cause i won't even remember your name" is just...killer. i love it.
| Traced In Green 6/13/03 . chapter 1
Another great song! I loved it!
| Raistlin-The Dark One 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Hmm..that's quite dramatic. I can almost hear the tune to this in my head. Great poem. I like how you switch between rhyme and free verse.
| Liller 6/7/03 . chapter 1
as always, wonderfully wonderful - you're very good at writing song lyrics. it ends on a nice note. confusing line, though: "as long as i'm here they'll always be a chance" did you mean "there will always be a chance"?
| InkedinSin 5/25/03 . chapter 1
i like the second part of this song, nicely done.
| Wrong Name Tag 5/22/03 . chapter 1
Pretty good, although I don't think it's as well written as some your others. Still pretty good, shows a kind of ; good job.
| Needa S 5/22/03 . chapter 1
Aww sad..and meanigul! Great job.. Keep writing..
| not sure yet 5/21/03 . chapter 1
interesting, sad yet not, more of a moving on piece, enjoyed it muchly though, very nice and has a good flow to it, excellent job!
| TragedyLovesMisery 5/20/03 . chapter 1
I really like this. Good job!
| Archetype Revolutionary 5/20/03 . chapter 1
Very deep, good use of dramatic repetition!