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Reviews For: Blue Sequins

chickadee
2003-08-22
ch 1,
the line "don't turn to me cause i won't even remember your name" is just...killer. i love it.
Traced In Green
2003-06-13
ch 1,
Another great song! I loved it!
luvs
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Raistlin-The Dark One
2003-06-11
ch 1,
Hmm..that's quite dramatic. I can almost hear the tune to this in my head. Great poem. I like how you switch between rhyme and free verse.
Liller
2003-06-07
ch 1,
as always, wonderfully wonderful - you're very good at writing song lyrics. it ends on a nice note. confusing line, though: "as long as i'm here they'll always be a chance" did you mean "there will always be a chance"?
InkedinSin
2003-05-25
ch 1,
i like the second part of this song, nicely done.
Wrong Name Tag
2003-05-22
ch 1,
Pretty good, although I don't think it's as well written as some your others. Still pretty good, shows a kind of st.rength; good job.

~Jess
Needa S
2003-05-22
ch 1,
Aww sad..and meanigul! Great job.. Keep writing..
not sure yet
2003-05-21
ch 1,
interesting, sad yet not, more of a moving on piece, enjoyed it muchly though, very nice and has a good flow to it, excellent job!
TragedyLovesMisery
2003-05-20
ch 1,
I really like this. Good job!
Archetype Revolutionary
2003-05-20
ch 1,
Very deep, good use of dramatic repetition!
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