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| chickadee 2003-08-22 ch 1,   | the line "don't turn to me cause i won't even remember your name" is just...killer. i love it. |
| Traced In Green 2003-06-13 ch 1, | Another great song! I loved it! luvs ~*RiotGirlGC33*~ |
| Raistlin-The Dark One 2003-06-11 ch 1, | Hmm..that's quite dramatic. I can almost hear the tune to this in my head. Great poem. I like how you switch between rhyme and free verse. |
| Liller 2003-06-07 ch 1, | as always, wonderfully wonderful - you're very good at writing song lyrics. it ends on a nice note. confusing line, though: "as long as i'm here they'll always be a chance" did you mean "there will always be a chance"? |
| InkedinSin 2003-05-25 ch 1, | i like the second part of this song, nicely done. |
| Wrong Name Tag 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Pretty good, although I don't think it's as well written as some your others. Still pretty good, shows a kind of st.rength; good job. ~Jess |
| Needa S 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Aww sad..and meanigul! Great job.. Keep writing.. |
| not sure yet 2003-05-21 ch 1, | interesting, sad yet not, more of a moving on piece, enjoyed it muchly though, very nice and has a good flow to it, excellent job! |
| TragedyLovesMisery 2003-05-20 ch 1, | I really like this. Good job! |
| Archetype Revolutionary 2003-05-20 ch 1, | Very deep, good use of dramatic repetition! |