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Burning Moon 2004-02-13 ch 1,	perfection . . . indeed :-D . . . i had 'unsung' by vanessa carlton in my head while i was reading this . . . excellent as always
SilverSpinner 2004-02-13 ch 1,	You left out a bit about perfection: it is attainable in your poetry. "Perfect" is really the only way to describe such a poem... bows before your awesome talent
Hindi Sad Diamonds 2003-12-09 ch 1,	"You will see if you Believe." Whoa. This is so stunning. Its simplicity seems to add to the amazing impact it leaves, and now I am left, once more, completely speechless. How do you write so well? You're truly, truly amazing!
PepsiAngel 2003-11-23 ch 1,	Your work leaves me breathless. Remarkable. Honestly, I'm really amazed. I had no idea you could create such simple pieces that nonetheless have a lasting impact. xCryssa
The Beast 2003-09-23 ch 1,	... what does one say when they find a POEM that encompasses perfection? if you know, then apply that to my opinion, for this is truely a work of a masters mind. i have read many poems, and seen the inner workings of many souls, and never have i seen such as this. Natasha, I commend you, honestly and fully. ~The Beast~
HighwayTantrum 2003-07-29 ch 1,	Interesting style, amazing poem. -Sardonyx
Be Summer Rain 2003-07-21 ch 1,	Wow that was so good! I loved the images, and the rhyming didn't make it seem nursery rhymish at all. Very uplifting, and over all, very good work.
dreamscatcher 2003-06-19 ch 1,	Wonderful. Really really good. I was thinking it was going to be faith-that God is in eveything-but somehow perfection worked even better. Impossible to acheive but wonderfully descibed here. Plus I love your rhyming-I can never make stuff ryhme and you seem to have done it so effortlessly. Very well done again!
obsidian katana 2003-06-01 ch 1,	wonderful poem! i don't know if you're Christian or not, but this sounds like a nice description of God. only He can give true love unending, and only He is perfect. oh well. good job on this. keep on writing!
Allie 2003-05-30 ch 1,	Mary Helen, I am a friend of Ben Fisher's and he's told me all about you of course. He told me you were a good writing, but he did not do you justice. This poem was incredible. God has tuly given you a gift, please, use it to glorify Him always. In this poem, you did. This poem about perfection really spoke to me, because our standard as Christians is perfection, but that perfection is "unattainable" on our own. Through Jesus Christ, and the blood He spilt, we are able to recive perfection in salvation. Let me encourage you, because our standard is perfection, never lower your standards for the world, for He has overcome the world (John 16:33). You keep writing, because God is truly glorified through you, and hold faithfully and unswervingly to the truth in all you do. God bless you!
CatieZee 2003-05-24 ch 1,	Great job, hun. Love the format and the title (::wink, wink:: ::nudge, nudge::). You did a great job with this. It just...works really well. Love ya. Beautiful poem.
breaker-one 2003-05-23 ch 1,	I really like this poem. Nicely writen. Good job :)
Demeter Rose 2003-05-22 ch 1,	Nice form, and nice idea. I'd write you a better review, but its too late at night and I'm begining to hallucinate. :)
PainKiller 2003-05-21 ch 1,	A really interesting and truthful look into perfection. I should know, but we''ll not go into that. Wonderful expression, great form and fluidity. Plus, it's quite long. Excellent piece!
estrellas 2003-05-21 ch 1,	nice poem and well written. first i thought it was a little egotistical till i got to the very last line. i was thinking that you may want to change the title to "perfection" and then kill it wher eyou say "i am perfection." but i dunno, it matches your writing style a lot. good poem :) (btw .. "God is love." 1 John 4:7-8 read it if you get a chance :) )

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