love it! I wanna see where it goes from here! sounds like an awesome start keep it up! Check out my story, Chrimson Chronicles, I don't know if it's quite your style but it's not bad!

Another great story from you ! It's really good , and really creative ! Thank you for telling me you wrote this. I'm so glad . It's really good , and thank you for reviewing.
Please write more !
-Destin Scar

Wow! Thats really funny- first Slade is described as a big, tough, merciless killer, and then it is said that he is making his bed... Keep writing!

Ambryllien

Great story, but maybe a little more description. Hope you write more!