I have never read something as beautiful and angelic as that. Your style is unmatched, and I envy you! This is your true talent, PLEASE stick with it! Imagery is dominant, and your expression of words is amazing. Oh man, I love it!

that was kinda pretty. I really don't like mushy stuff much, but the rhyming scheme was really nice and tranquil. thank you very much. the only thing that bothered me was that 'normal' part. I lost the feel of the song/poem. Keep writting. Peace Out! ^.~