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| aleppine 2003-07-07 ch 1,   | Hehe, that last line just inserted this picture of a mad scientist type person in lab coat into ma brain. :D I know that intimate feeling of red-lit dark - but not from developing photos; from a daram studio, which is much more spacey and airy, but I know that feeling. There's such a secret hugging-to-self feeling in it. I like your imagery with the match; it's a perfect metaphor. |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-06-14 ch 1, | different view on photo development...deep in a strange sort of way...i like it! you're a good poet... |
| greenfroggies 2003-06-08 ch 1, | i like it! keep writing, i am catching you up! |
| Mother Goose 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Cool. I like the imagery about the red light and the darkness. |