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| Needa S 2003-06-02 ch 1,   | God does help us through our sorriws. I know for I lost my mother and dad but Heaven was their gain. I'm sorry for your loss. You did a great job putting this together. I think your friend would have been proud. God Bless! |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Well written. You use 'floor' a lot, but that doesn't matter. Nice job! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| liquid*crystal 2003-05-21 ch 1, | aw... and i really am saying that with geniuine sympathy. it's good that you can write to release your grief. this is a heartfelt poem. keep writing. [ tentative :-) ] |
| Summer1 2003-05-21 ch 1, | Vivid. Lots of visions while reading. :) Sad too. |
| TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJa... 2003-05-21 ch 1, | its painful 2 lose sum1...especailly wen their close 2 u... |