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| Niki Dee 2007-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a nice description, but as far as poetry goes, it didn't quite hit the mark to me. The word choice was good and it flowed well. However, it didn't invoke any sort of feeling. It started to bring forth a memory. Over all, i'd give it about 3.5 - 4 stars =) |
| Kella Trams 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one. Because, it was actually hard to tell what you were describing (if I hadn't looked at the title) but you were very descriptive at the same time. I like that you have some rhyming but it isn't consistent. |
| N. Browne 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job on this. The rhyming was great and you did a good job on the whole poem! Nicely Done -NB |
| Manic Star 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like it! It's really pretty and the rhyming is nice. |
| LauraKM 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, not so sure about the last line but i'm adding it to my favorites |
| aknightsgoldenrose 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty poem. I liked the part about icicles being like tears. |
| Earendil=Beloved Star 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuse^_^! Thank you first of all for having me on you fav. author list! This poem is so wonderfully described, I enjoyed it that I did. It was very intresting. Very - I can't even place it in words- it was -- wonderful! ^_^! Keep writing! -- By the way I am re- adding Unseen to Us on my account! |
| wonky donkey 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. I love trees too. San Antonio sucks there are no good trees here, just stupid live oaks God im so sick of live oaks, haha. Cheers! |