*laughs* But, why didn't his mom stop him from leaving. o.O

That's really nice. He goes over the people hating him thing a lot but I suppose I would, too.

Um...Whoa. That moved very very fast. I'll have to wait until you update to see if it is too fast. But i'm liking what i'm reading. Update soon.

When I Look Into Your Eyes, started off good. I mean, really. I was like 'Oh, look, finally, a story that's going to be good.' But once I hit chapter 2, things just kinda went fast. I mean.. there is no interaction between Andy and Jamie to see the 'falling in' of love. And marriage. Hmm. I hardly believe that's legal. Maybe it is where you live, but.. I dunno. It simply upset me some.

Haha! *grins* Yay! Cut story...

Ok,Mistress I wanna tell u something about one of your reviewers her name is "Zoe"! Don't listen to her it's a WHOLE lot of **, Their teenagers so they do get married like that! And 2.Zoe if your reading this,LOTS of people who CAN'T AFFORD real expensive rings like "You" CAN go to WALMART! 3.This my be chessy,BUT IT'S ROMANCE DUH! 3.EVER HEARD OF PLOT TWIST there "Miss-I-Know-EVERYTHING about stories!". 4.Have u EVER written a story,IT'S REALLY BLOODY HARD! SO how r u suppose to know?! 5.I knew some reviewer like u who insulted my very FIRST fic,Give Mis a chance before u judge this! 5.That's it for now,I'll can't wait till u update Mis! ^_^

Ok,1. Just so u know u spelled Sweety sweaty,Just wanted to tell u so u can edited! Also I LUV IT, I was like nobody and I mean NOBODY has EVER gotten 2 characters engaged in ONLY ONE CHAP and get away with it and it acutually work out REALLY well! Ok,Luv it! UPDATE SOON PLZ! ^_^ Lots of fan luv of course

Aww! That's so cute! Please please please update!!

"Little did they know, that just by being there with me, Jamie had given me all the support they had given me over three year in a matter of hours." --erm, that's quite a statement. and rather obnoxious. i'd hate it if someone told me that all the support i'd given them for three years was only worth a couple hours of some cute guy's attention.
"As time progressed so did my relationship with Jamie. Before I knew it the end of our junior year was almost upon us." -- might i ask what the point of this story is if you're not going to SHOW the character development, and the development of these two characters? so far, the characters have done nothing but meet. we know nothing of their personalities, so we really have no reason to care about them or what they do.
"I say this because I would either be reborn into a new world of love and compassion or I would kill myself." -- it's a pretty ** stupid overreaction to kill oneself over a romantic rejection. melodramatic and a rather overused plot device.
""Well, I think I love you. No wait! I don't think, I know! I love you with every fiber in my being. And I never want to be alone again."" first of all, no one says "with ever fiber of my being." it's hugely cheesy. second of all, we as the readers really have no reason to give a crap if these people are "in love" because we havent seen it happen, we havent seent he development of it, and as far as we know, the characters are free of personality.
"Jamie grinned and grabbed my hand dragging me out to his car, a black metal flake convertably mustang." -- rather sad that one of the few things that you felt warranted a description was the kid's car.
"He then proceeded to drive me to the local Wal-Mart." -- walmart?? what kind of ** buys an engagement ring at walmart...
""Andrew Millers, will you marry me?"" oh for christ's sake! they only MET in the last chapter, have ONLY JUST confessed their love like 2 PARAGRAPHS ago, and suddenly they're getting MARRIED?! how ridiculous!
"M-marriage?" mom spluttered. "Sweaty, there are ways to to help you get over you…uh…homosexuality." -- 1) the woman just called her son 'sweaty' as a term of endearment. i do hope you mean sweety. 2) you led us to believe that his mother was okay with his homosexuality, and now somehow she's not? make up your mind.
""We're going to elope."" -- OH FOR **'S SAKE!!
16 year olds who just met, just proclaimed their 'love,' and JUST got engagaed with a ** WALMART RING now want to ELOPE. how utterly rushed, impulsive and ignorant these kids are. ugh.

too much infodump at the beginning of the story. and why is he under the impression he'll never meet another gay person? he'd have to be INCREDIBLY sheltered to think that.
"People will shun you, treat you like a freak of nature, one person even suggested therapy. That was insulting." -- people like that are in the vast minority. it's very far-fetched that the kid doesnt know even one supportive person, or even someone who's indifferent.
"Being homosexual, people don't generally talk to me, so I this, didn't get this feeling very often." -- it's extremely odd that he wouldnt have any friends just because he's gay. quite a stretch of my sense of reality to believe that no one would even *talk* to him.
""Don't worry, Andy." He told me softly. "I won't let you be lonely anymore."" -- quite cheesy, and not something any person is likely to say to someone they just met.
"Who would have thought that I of all people could be falling in love?" -- being that falling in love is one of the first things that the character mentions in the story, the forshadowing leaves pretty much no doubt that the guy will be falling in love.
lonely gay guy falls in love with the new student in school is one of the oldest and most overdone plotlines in original slash. your description needs some work, and you need to work on "showing, not telling."

hehe, that last part was pretty funny. he's all like "screw it" and i'm like, hahahaha! feel sorry fer andy, his mom doesn't even support him. so that whole thing was a lie? sucky... can u write another chapter bout what happens? i'd love it in the *extreme.* wonderful writing!

oh, tell me you're going to update this! PLEASE! I'm begging you, I LOVE this story! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseetc... Please? :) email me if you need any kind of help!
thedragonpoet@hotmail.com
I'm begging you! please!
NayNymic

This is a great story so far I can't wait to read more so update again as soon as you are able to.

^^ Hi there. Really cute story. The marriage seemed a little rushed for me, and I doubt that it would be that easy for them to get married, but it's a nice thought. I think that if you keep this up, you could be a really great writer when you're older, so spend some time working on character development and such. I look forward to reading more of your stuff, but it's 9 am, and too bloody early..

And to answer your question: "Flowers for Ophelia (Suite for the Sweet)" really doesn't have anything to do with the story. It's a really great song by J. Englishman, and I love Hamlet.. and I was stumped for a title when the song came on... voila!

Thanks for reviewing! -Beautiful Midnight

I'm really liking this. Don't give up now! Continue! :)