I know where you're coming from. Of course, this is how I feel about my brother, but... yeah. I don't know what to say. This is really moving, really good...

God, I'm crying. Is that true? That really was yours?

I like this. Just remember: "I kill you to love you." - Slipknot, "Iowa"

This is so raw and deep. i commend you. You did a brillaint job, it sounds so true and real. I really have to say, putting your deepest secrets for everyone to see takes balls. It's an amazing poem. I really really like it. sos

OMG! I feel the exact same way about someone! I can totally relate- awesome work!

I liked this, got an odd sort of rhythym but thats part of what i liked about it. Keep up the good work!

I liked this poem, it was great written and able to display the characters feeling, love it, write more

Very powerful portrayal of torn feelings. Very well written.

I... I don't really know what to say to this one...

It's breathtaking...

wonderfully written! great emotion, i was held encaptured through the whole thing! the change in ideas and feelings was so realistic and so perfectly protrayed. the use of "Daddy" instead of "father" or "dad" or "papa" was perfect. the last lined summed the whole thing up. it was abosolutly spectacular.