draining life is not my thing... good poem though, loved the single word lines, the feeling and picture of wanting to be something not seen...

this takes u 2 anotha world, where u feel like ur sumthin else than u r, wut u wish 2 b, but u cant, good

good useage of words, like, you didn't have to use a lot of words to convey your thoughts. good job

That poem was quite good indeed, I too am intrigued with the life of a vampire, though I'm not sure about the whole dying thing though, a little too serious, but if its your obsession, go for it :)

Wow! just completely spellbinding passionate and enthralling..it blew me away and i could even feel the blood boil inside of me..Wicked!

It's a very strong poem because of the repeating structure. Of course I also like the content :) Well done!