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| Stefen 2004-07-01 ch 1, | Aw! That was so sad! Aw! I love it! |
| Gilded Muse 2003-08-09 ch 1, | I really didn't have time to read this story. Job interview in less then fifteen minutes and I need to et going. I kept telling myself I'd just save it and come back later. But then I started reading and just couldn't stop. So I told myself I’d stop at the next paragraph. The next break.I’d get going soon. Damn you for sucking me in. And now, of course, I have to review to tell you how much I loved it (excuse any bad grammar or spelling. I'm rushed.) It was sobering and depressing. Just how a good angst story should be. The payer really kicked it, but not as much as the note. The repeat of the soft lines, however, really gave time for that ache in the reader's chest to set in. Signed; Alexia |
| Diana Shore 2003-05-23 ch 1, | That was almost too real. |
| Slightly Neurotic 2003-05-22 ch 1, | Hey, it's me. Like I told you before, this story is heartbreakingly good. Amazing job. Write more soon...anything. PLEASE |